Mandarin speakers, check my translation? (:?

I’m doing a "chinglish" (mostly Mandarin, some English) movie report on Red Cliff (赤壁) for my second year Mandarin class. This assignment was especially difficult for me because my basic vocabulary does not include military terms, which is basically all the movie was about, haha. Anyways, I tried my best, but I feel as though my verbs are wrong and the sentence order is incorrect. If you speak Mandarin, would you mind checking it over briefly? It does not need to be perfect, as this is just a rough draft, it just needs to make sense somewhat. ;D

Thank you very much.

孙尚香隐藏在 曹操的营,孙尚香报告了到诸葛亮 using 信鸽。同时曹操的军病了with 伤寒。曹操 sends船的 dead 人到赤壁 in order to make 赤壁的军也病。他们的盟友 刘备,breaks 联盟; 他 回家因为他的军太病。但是诸葛亮 住宿。曹操很 高兴因为他们的联盟 is broken。
曹操的 海军上将 张允和 蔡瑁 propose a new idea; 他们要 锁船 一起 同 木头. Once they do this 士兵 没有 晕船。孙尚香(Sun Shangxiang)tells 诸葛亮about 曹操 和他的海军上将的计划。 周瑜和诸葛亮也有计划。诸葛亮要有十万支箭头。周瑜要杀 蔡瑁和 张允。 他们有 赌注;如果他们没有 成功,他们的头 斩首 by each other。诸葛亮有 聪明的 想法, 他 有很多的船 made out of 稻草。这个天有 薄雾,曹操 认为诸葛亮 打击。可是 曹操 射箭, 箭头 sticks 在船的 稻草 。 何时诸葛亮有十万支箭头 stuck 在船, 他回他的营。

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