Can anyone evaluate my Mandarin? What should I work on?

Here is the sound file (me talking):

I had no special idea so I just made a simple thing lasting a few seconds. It’s not very good, I know, I just wanted to hear myself speaking.

I’m very disapointed with how my chinese sound 🙁

What should I work on? Is there any word I really mispronounced?

Thanks in advance.

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