SOMEBODY WHO SPEAKS MANDARIN CHINESE PLEASE HELP?

Can you tell me if this sentence is properly translated?

from: The weather forecast on the internet just said that it will not only be very cold tomorrow but it will also snow

to: 网上的天气预报刚才说了不但明天回很冷,而且会下雪

Thanks!

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